On Sat, Aug 05, 2023 at 09:54:25AM +0200, Thorsten Leemhuis wrote:
[adding Sasha and Jon to the CC, seem I forget to do that on the cover letter; sorry!]
On 05.08.23 09:21, Thorsten Leemhuis wrote:
When adding something to this document earlier I noticed that readers need to perform some back and forth to fully understand things; I also noticed a few other aspects that seemed somewhat odd for me with my background on writing and editing texts.
Find attached a few patches to improve things. The first three are mainly moving text around to a structure which is somewhat clearer. They leave quite a few rough edges behind that are fixed in in the last patch of the series, which changes a few other changes as well; thx to the prep patches the diff should be relative straight-forward to understand.
These patches are on-top of the following series that currently is in the driver-core-testing branch: https://lore.kernel.org/all/cover.1689056247.git.linux@leemhuis.info/
FWIW, in case anyone wonders how the text looks in the end, see:
https://www.leemhuis.info/files/kernel/stable-rules/stable-kernel-rules.txt
https://www.leemhuis.info/files/kernel/stable-rules/Everything%20you%20ever%...
Looks very good, thanks!
greg k-h