On Mon, Jul 10, 2023 at 07:10:13PM +0200, Thorsten Leemhuis wrote:
Optimize the text flow to make things more straight forward to follow:
- remove a subheading without real purpose
- after outlining the three options add a section that explains them in more detail; move the "Following the submission" text that set in the middle of this to a later place in the document
- a few small clarifications along the way
All of this churn makes it really hard to determine what the end result is. Do you have a before/after result anywhere?
Or maybe split this out into 3 different patches?
thanks,
greg k-h